Candy Candy i love you so much!!!!!!!!!!

I unwrapped the colorful wrapper. When the wrapper was open i saw your eyes looking at me in a waiting way. When i put you in my mouth you began to walk down my throat. You got to my crying sad tummy and began to do a dance. When you began to dance my tummy began to start singing "I like it". My eyes began to hop and i began to pop. I guess i was becoming hyper i don't care, i wasn't going to be a square. O candy candy i love you so much. SUGAR RUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My crying Bladder

My crying Bladder

Once I was walking to the mall. I got to the mall and I really had to pee and so I went in the washroom and all the doors were closed so I waited.  It was a 20 minutes later and no one came out so I thought all these people had to poop. So I waited 10 more minutes. I finally gave up and said I will go to the other bathroom. When I got there it was the same but I said Ok I will try to hold it and walk around the mall so that’s what I did. So I was in Rave and I was about to urinate myself, so I sprinted to the guys facilities and there were was only 2 stalls and both of them had feces in them so I sprinted to the next bathroom.

This bathroom had  urine on the seat and I almost began to cry. I decided I would wipe the urination if the toilet and pee. So I did, then about 2 hours later I walked in the ladies bathroom again and I noticed there was no one in there. And I just stood there with my jaw on the floor and then a whole group of ladies walked in and then the bathrooms really were occupied. This time I did not have to wait that long. So at the end of the day my bladder and I were exhausted and ready to settle down.
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